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Electronique v1 by `mindfuckx:iconmindfuckx:

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Electronique v1
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Electronique is a project for school I'm working on.
This was just a first draft of the design, far from perfect ( too much candy-looking ) but I wanted to share it nevertheless.

I know it's not orignal.. but I like how it looks :)

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`Norke May 1, 2009, 5:50:49 AM
I'm critiquing since you said it's far from finished yet. It's fresh, colorful and uses nice graphics, but it feels to me like one of the so many. Still it's pixelperfect for it's kind. I love the double pixellines and embossed fonts. I don't mind the candylook too much, you're aiming for a party people (and I'm sure they love pink, purple and blue lights).

What bugs me a bit is that the logo seems unfinished. It looks like a rough presentation, for what it could look like later. It's rather poor compared to the quality of the headsets.

You didn't score high on originality and impact, but it's a great start. I'd love to see your progress from here on. I'm sure everybody could learn from following your progress.
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=SuicideCow May 1, 2009, 5:43:49 AM
First of all I love your work in general, and every new design keeps amazing me, and so does this design. I really, really love the background you used for the site. I also like the logo and the header, it fits in nicely :)

I do have to say that I don't really like the navigation menu, I find it a little bit too big. I also would like to know how to rest of the design and the footer would look like, right now the design looks a bit "empty" in terms of content.

Keep up the good work :)
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=Rawox May 1, 2009, 5:38:25 AM
LOOKS COOL!

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=JurgenDoe May 1, 2009, 5:51:22 AM
Looks great so far :clap:

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~BboyWicked May 1, 2009, 6:21:38 AM
I think the noise or whatever on the background is a bit too strong but other than that it's a nice and clean design. :)

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=eXoHeartbeat May 1, 2009, 7:08:35 AM
Nice, looks great. I like the colours. Reminds me of the apple site.

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=Enkera-2005 May 1, 2009, 7:27:34 AM
Nice one Jan,
the main problem would be the lack of a branding-colour,
other then that nice mock up :)

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*xyphid May 1, 2009, 7:35:21 AM
allow me to scream trendy :D
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`sentrixx May 1, 2009, 8:17:32 AM
Candy or not, it looks good. Can't wait to see the finished version.

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=ctrl-click May 1, 2009, 8:35:15 AM
I'm missing more content and a footer, I think you can do better detailing than this mate. Logo ain't doing it for me either...
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~GFXNode May 1, 2009, 8:47:50 AM
very nice, reminds me of itunes
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